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The informal English phrase in the excerpt is "Ok so now im all out of what I wanted to say," characterized by the casual tone and use of abbreviation.
The phrase from the excerpt which uses informal English is "Ok so now im all out of what I wanted to say." This phrase can be identified as informal due to the use of the abbreviation 'im' instead of the proper contraction 'I'm,' and the overall casual tone, which is indicative of speech rather than formal writing. This reflects the intimate and conversational style often used when people are expressing personal thoughts or narrating personal experiences.
The last sentence is very formal. It does not contain the first person pronoun (I or me) which is one of the marks of informal writing. Having given you the answer, may I say that question is almost totally irrelevant. I do not mean that you are at fault for having asked it. You are only asking for an answer, and that was given.
What I really mean to say is that I hope you get to read more of Amy Tan's remarks about her mother's English. They are astonishing observations and should be required reading by every student taking English or American Literature.
Thank you for posting this question. I didn't there was more to Tan's essay about her mother's English that I didn't know about, and I'm glad to know there is more.
